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雅思小作文写作技巧总结

全动写法：适用于交通工具、电话、CD、历史书籍等动词主导的主题。

静动结合写法：适用于简单线图，如牛肉、因特网、炸鱼薯条、Timber等例子。

静动结合写法(交叉写法)：交通工具2

1.描述时间段的词组

  • Over a 10-year period
  • Throughout the period
  • During this 10-year period
  • Over the period

2.单线描述句型

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2.1 The number of teachers declined from… in… to… in…

eg: The number of teachers declined from approximately 4.5 million in 1960 to nearly 2.5 million in 1962.

2.2 there was an ascent in the number of sth from in to in

eg: There was an ascent in the number of teachers from nearly 2.5 million in 1962 to 6 million in 1964.

2.3 直接对象+experienced an upward trend 【in 主语, 对象是国家、博物馆可以省略】, rising from in to in

Local fixed line calls experienced an upward trend in usage, rising from ……in ……in……

3.双线描述句型

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3.1 1+2

The number of teachers declined from in to in, but/and then there was an ascent to ..in…..
The number of teachers declined from approximately 4.5 million in 1960 to nearly 2.5 million in 1962, but there was an ascent to 6 million in 1964.

3.2 1+1

The number of teachers declined from in to in, but/and then it ascended to…in

3.3 1+followed by

The number of teachers declined from in to in, followed by an ascent to…in……

3.4 1+before

The number of teachers declined from in to in before ascending to…in…..

3.5 After+1

After declining from in to in, 主语 ascended to…in

3.6 There be+followed by

there was an ascent in the number of sth from in to in, followed by a decline to ….in….

4.起点句型=静态描述

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或：对象 had the highest/lowest popularity, with…

最大值(并不是指相对于自身最大, 而是在总体中最大):

  • Beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with 220 grams consumed per person per week.
  • Buses were by far the most popular of these modes of transportation, with 38% of individuals using them.

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最小值:

  • …was the least popular __ , with only …
  • The least favored choice/food was…, with only…

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比较：

  • …was much less popular, with…
  • …and…were much less popular, with…

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同等:

  • …and…were equally less popular, with…

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第二： … was the second most favored choice, …

第三： … was the next preferred option,..

popular类文章并且数据指人-引出数据的方式：

  • …, with only 5% of men choosing them
  • …, attracting/which attracted only 5% of men
  • , appealing to/drawing/which appealed to/which drew…
  • , which were chosen/selected by
  • , chosen/selected by

4.2 The number/percentage/sales/consumption of sth主语

最大值: In 1979, the consumption of beef was by far the highest, at 220 grams.
最小值: In 1979, the consumption of fish was the lowest, at just over 50 grams.
普通: In 1979, the consumption of beef was/started at/stood at 220 grams.
AB比较: the number of A, at…, was higher than that of B, at…

4.3 数据作主语

eg1: In 1979, 220 grams of beef were consumed.
eg2: 20% of men favored comedy movies, while the percentage of men preferring thriller movies was slightly lower, at 15%.

20% of men favored comedy movies, while 15% preferred thriller movies.

4.4 the figure for 对象

普通: the figure for 对象 was/started at/stood at….
比较:

  • the figure for …was significantly/slightlly lower, at ….
  • the figure for …and… were significantly/slightly lower, at…and…, respectively

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相似:

  • the figures for …and…were similar, each hovering around…
  • the figures for…and…were the same, both at…

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最小值：the figure for…was the lowest, at…

tips:

  • The figure for 短
  • The percentage of 全

eg: In 1979, the proportion of individuals who commuted by bus was 38%, while the figure for tube was 18%.

4.5 对象+had

最大值:

  • The USA had the highest proportion of Internet users, at 20%(动态图)
  • …had the highest figure/percentage, at 数据

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最小值: …had the lowest figure/percentage, at数据

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比较：

  • …had a lower figure/percentage, at 数据
  • …and… had lower figures/percentages, at…and…, respectively

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相似: …and…had similar figure, each hovering around…

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相等：…and…had hte same figure, both at…

4.6 对象+attracted/appealed to/drew (受欢迎类文章+数据是人)

普通: Romantic comedies attracted only 5% of male viewers.

The least preferred choice was romantic comedies, 引出数据 which attracted only 5% of men.

区分：

  • the USA had the highest/lowest proportion of Internet users
  • Canada had the most/least Internet users in 2009

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Popular类文章常用的动词：

  • Choose-select-opt for sth-opt to do sth
  • favor=prefer

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eg: Action movies were by far the most favored of these films genres among men, with 40% of male viewers choosing to watch them. In comparison, 20% of men favored comedy movies, while the percentage of men preferring thriller movies was slightly lower, at 15%. In addition, science fiction and western movies had the same figure, both at 10%. On the other hand, the least preferred choice was romantic comedies, which attracted only 5% of men.

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最大值用法(3),最小值：4个:

  • Action moives were by far the most favored of these films genres among men, with 40% of male viewers choosing to watch them
  • Action movies had the highest percentage, at 40%
  • The percentage of men choosing to watch action movies was by far the highest, at 40%
  • 这里相对最小值的用法缺少一个 the figure for

4.7 对象be chosen/selected/favored/preferred by 「受欢迎类文章+数据指人」

可以理解为4.6的另一种表达方法

Romantic comedies were chosen by only 5% of male viewers.

4.8 double

引出新对象：…, double the percentage of graduates pursuing careers in the other sectors, at 2.8%

写出旧对象：…-a figure half that of service industries.

eg：The manufacturing industry was the second most favored sector, attracting 16.3% of graduates-a figure half that of service industries.

eg：Civil service employed had the 5.6% of graduates, double the percentage of graduates pursuing careers in the other sectors, at 2.8%.

4.9 followed by

前面最好用对象开头, followed closed by 对象

eg：Education was the next preferred option, which was chosen by 14.7% of graduates, followed closely by politics & government, with 12.1% of graduates securing employment in this field.

4.10 总结

句型 引出数据
popular , with…/accracting… /chosen by…
The number of , at
数据做主语 0
The figure for , at
对象 had , at
对象 attracted 0
对象 be chosen 0
double , at
, followed by 随机

4.11 人开头写结尾：popular类文章

  • Over half of all couples chose Thailand and Bali as their preferred honeymoon destinations.
  • Only a small number of couples opted to visit the Lake District and Spain.

4.12 组合图

  1. The pie chart illustrates…, and the table depicts….
  2. Looking at the pie chart, ….
  3. According to the table, …..
  4. To sum up, ……. It is also evident that……

5.加分句型

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5.1 表相反

In contrast, ……… experienced an inverse trend/trajectory.

5.2 全年最高句型

… was/were the highest throughout the period, growing from in to in. However, it had fallen back to..by…

5.3 过去完成时：用在终点

  • 全年最高句型终点
  • 1+1句型终点

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5.4 评价数据

回到原点：… , returning to its initial level/ending at the same level as it started.

5.5 幅度拓展

先写整体区间的趋势，though the rate of growth decelerated over the last two years/albeit with a slower growth rate over the last two years.

先写整体区间的趋势. This rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, exemplified by an astounding climb of 30 billion minutes.

先写整体区间的趋势, with this rise being particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, exemplified by an astounding climb of 30 billion minutes.

5.6 通用

最后一年 = at the end of the period in question

5.7 双上升/下降

… saw a downward trend, declining from in to in

There was an ascent in the number of sth, rising from in to in

… declined 不加幅度 from in to in, reflecting/indicating a substantial reduction in the X-year interval.

5.8 全年最低：忽略趋势的写法

… remained constantly low during this 10-year period, fluctuating within the range of …. and …copies.

… remained constantly low during this 10-year period, starting at…. and ending at…. copies.

5.9 两个对象并列写法

…..and….fell (from …and…) to …and ……, respectively.

5.10 幅度对比

…also declined, although this drop was much less pronounced, dwindling to/ending at ….

…also declined, but this drop was much more pronounced, dwindling to/ending at…

5.11 超过段：2句话

…showed an upward trend, overtaking/surpassing that of..in…

By …, it had surged, peaking at…

5.12 三条线整体区间下降，只有中间有一个小上升

…, though there was a slight ascent between 1980 and 1985.

5.13 简化版幅度对比

…saw a much less/more pronounced rise to…

6.词汇

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6.1 相反

In contrast / Conversely / On the contrary

6.2 中性词

Meanwhile / Alternatively / Following a different pattern

6.3 强调小幅度

Only / merely / a mere / a meager

6.4 近似

approximately / around / almost / about / nearly / roughly
Just over / just below
just shy of

6.4 趋势表达

短语表达上升下降：

  • Experienced / saw / underwent +an upward trend
  • Showed / displayed / demonstrated + a downward trend

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上升:

  • V. : Ascended / rose / grew / escalated / climbed / went up / increased / surged
  • N. : An ascent / a rise / growth / an escalation / a climb / an upward trend / an increase / a surge
  • N. ：an upswing; an uptick

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恢复: Recovered / A recovery

下降:

  • V. : Declined / dropped / dipped / descended / dwindled / reduced / fell / went down / decreased / plunged
  • N. : A decline / a drop / a dip / a descent / a reduction / a fall / a downward trend / a decrease / a plunge

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保持不变

  • Remained stable / unchanged; leveled off;
  • Remained relatively stable/unchanged;
  • a period of leveling off

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波动：

  • Fluctuated
  • Experienced slight/wild fluctuation

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极值:

  • peak at 数据
  • reach a peak of
  • hit a high of
  • hit a low of
  • bottom out at

7.幅度词汇

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大:

  • ADV. : Massively; substantially; considerably; significantly; enormously; drastically
  • ADJ. : Massive; substantial; considerable; significant; enormous; drastic

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中:

  • ADV. : Moderately; steadily; gradually;
  • ADJ. : Moderate; steady; gradual

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小:

  • ADV. : Slightly; marginally; negligibly; minimally
  • ADJ. : Slight; marginal; negligible; minimal

8.首段改写

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The diagram depicts the variations in the 数据形式of 对象+地点+时间

The diagram depicts the variations in the number of teachers who worked full time in regular schools (in millions) in China over a 30-year period from 1960 to 1990.

The diagram depicts the variations in the proportion of individuals who used the Internet in the USA, Canada, and Mexico over a ten-year period between 1999 and 2009.

8.1 对象

full-time teachers of regular schools

teachers who worked full time in regular schools 定语从句

Teachers working full time in regular schools

8.2 数据形式

数量：The number of - the amount of 不可数名词单数
百分比：The percentage = the proportion of

8.3 时间改写

1960-1990
Between 1960 and 1990
From 1960 to 1990
Over a 30-year period from 1960 to 1990 only in the first paragraph
In 1960, 1980, and 2000
In three separate years: 1960, 1980, and 2000
In 2005: in the year 2005

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10.26 transportation + telephone

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transportation

题目：The bar chart below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980, and 2000.

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the proportion of commuters who used various types of transportation in a specific European city in three separate years: 1960, 1980, and 2000.

The proportion of commuters using buses dwindled[\] massively from approximately 38% in 1960 to 15% in 2000. Conversely, there was an enormous escalation[/] in the use of cars from a mere 7% in 1960 to around 38% in 2000.

Train use grew[/] moderately from 18% in 1960 to just over 25% in 1980 before dipping[\] marginally to 23% in 2000. In contrast, tube usage experienced an inverse trajectory. It declined[\] from roughly 27% in 1960 to 22% in 1980, followed by a negligible uptick[/] to 25% in 2000.

To sum up, the popularity of trains and cars ascended[/] over the period, while that of the other two types of transportation dropped[\]. It is also evident that cars became the most popular method of transportation in the year 2000.

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Subject：

  • 1.the proportion of commuters who used buses
  • 2.the proportion of commuters using buses
  • 3.the proportion of individuals who commuted by bus
  • 4.the proportion of individuals commuting by bus
  • 5.the percentage of bus users/commuters
  • 6.The use of buses
  • 7.The usage of buses
  • 8.Bus use
  • 9.Bus usage
  • 10.The popularity of buses 结尾

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telephone

题目：

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the total number of minutes of three types of telephone calls in Britain over an eight-year period between 1995 and 2002.

The usage of local-fixed line calls ascended[/] steadily from just over 70 billion minutes in 1995 to approximately 90 billion minutes in 1999, before dropping[\] moderately to around 70 billion minutes in 2002.

The use of national and international-fixed line calls escalated[/] gradually from around 25 billion minutes in 1995 to almost 60 billion minutes in 2002.

There was an enormous rise[/] in mobile call usage from a mere 2 billion minutes to nearly 40 billion minutes.

To sum up, the popularity of local-fixed line calls remained relatively stable[-] over the period, while that of the other two types of telephone calls climbed[/]. It is also evident that local fixed line calls were still the most[^] popular call type in the year 2002.

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Subject：

  • 1.the total number of minutes of local-fixed line calls
  • 2.the number of minutes spent on local-fixed line calls
  • 3.The amount of time spent on local-fixed line calls
  • 4.The use of local-fixed line calls
  • 5.The usage of local-fixed line calls
  • 6.Local-fixed line call usage
  • 7.The popularity of local-fixed line calls

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10.27 book + CD + meat + telephone_v2

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book

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the sales of four types of reading materials in six separate years: 2002, 2004, 2006, 2008, 2010, and 2012.

The numbers of history books sold ascended massively from over 4 thousand copies in 2002 to 10 thousand copies in 2008, followed by a drop to around 9 thousand copies in 2012.

The sales of Art books negligibly climbed from just below 2 thousand copies in 2002 to 4 thousand copies in 2012. In addition, there was a moderate upswing in entertainment book soles from just shy of 2 thousand copies in 2002 to around 3 thousand copies in 2006, and then it remained relatively unchanged between 2006 and 2012.

Hobby books sales experience wild fluctuation over the 10-year period from 2002 to 2012.

To sum up, the popularity of hobby books fluctuated slightly over the period, while that of other three categories of book escalated. It is also evident that history book became the most popular type of reading materials in the year 2012.

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the sales of four types of reading materials over a 10-year period between 2002 and 2012.
The number of history book sold was the highest[^] throughout the period, growing[/] massively from over 4,000 copies in 2002 to 10,000 copies in 2008, with this rise[/] being particularly noticeable between 2004 and 2006, exemplified by an astounding climb[/] of 3,500 copies. However, it had fallen[\] back to around 9,000 copies by 2012.

The sales of art books experienced an upward[/] trend, ascending[/] steadily from just below 2,000 copies in 2002 to 4,000 copies in 2012, though the rate of growth[/] decelerated[\] over the last two years. In addition, there was a moderate upswing[/] in entertainment book sales, increasing[/] from just shy of 2,000 copies in 2002 to around 3,000 copies in 2006, followed by a period of leveling off[-] until the end of the period in question.

Following a different pattern, the sales of hobby books remained constantly low during this 10-year period, fluctuating[~] within the range of 200 and 500 copies. 【Following a different pattern, the sales of hobby books remained constantly low during this 10-year period, starting at 500 copies and ending at 200 copies. 】

To sum up, the popularity of hobby books fluctuated[~] slightly over the period, while that of the other three categories of books witnessed growth escalated[/]. It is also evident that history books were the most popular reading materials. 【history book became the most popular type of reading materials in the year 2012.】

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Subject:

  • The sales of history books
  • the number of history books sold
  • History book sales
  • The popularity of history books
  • History books直接对象

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  • 全年最高句型 + 幅度拓展: The number of history book sold was the highest[^] throughout the period, growing[/] massively from over 4,000 copies in 2002 to 10,000 copies in 2008, with this rise[/] being particularly noticeable between 2004 and 2006, exemplified by an astounding climb[/] of 3,500 copies. However, it had fallen[\] back to around 9,000 copies by 2012.
  • 幅度拓展: The sales of art books experienced an upward[/] trend, ascending[/] steadily from just below 2,000 copies in 2002 to 4,000 copies in 2012, though the rate of growth[/] decelerated[\] over the last two years.
  • 双上升/下降 + There be+followed by : In addition, there was a moderate upswing[/] in entertainment book sales, increasing[/] from just shy of 2,000 copies in 2002 to around 3,000 copies in 2006, followed by a period of leveling off[-] until the end of the period in question.
  • 中性词: Following a different pattern
  • 全年最低：忽略趋势的写法: Following a different pattern, the sales of hobby books remained constantly low during this 10-year period, fluctuating[~] within the range of 200 and 500 copies.

CD

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the number of games software, CDs and DVD or video sold worldwide over a 4-year period from 2000 to 2003.

The sales of games softeware ascended marginally from approximately 12 billion dollar in 2000 to around 18 billion dollar in 2003.

There was a moderate escalation in the DVD or video sales from roughly 18 billion dollar in 2000 to just over 30 billion dollar in 2003.

The number of CDs which were sold in the world dwindled slightly from just shy of 35 billion dollar in 2000 to nearly 32 billion dollar in 2002, but it recovered to 33 billion dollar in 2003.

To sum up, the popularity of CDs sales remained relatively stable over the period, while that of the other two types of multimedia entertainment products climbed. It is also evident that CDs were still the most popular digital products in the year 2003.

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the sales of game software, CDs, and DVD or video sold worldwide over a 4-year period from 2000 to 2003.

The sales of CDs were the highest[^] throughout the period, dwindling[\] slightly from just shy of 35 billion dollars in 2000 to nearly 32 billion in 2002. However, sales had recovered[/] to 33 billion by 2003.

There was a massive escalation[/] in DVD or video sales, growing[/] from roughly 18 billion in 2000 to just over 30 billion in 2003, with this rise[/] being particularly noticeable between 2001 and 2002, exemplified by as astounding climb[/] of 7 billion.

The sales of game software experienced an upward[/] trend, ascending[/] steadily from approximately 12 billion in 2000 to around 18 billion dollars in 2002, followed by a period of leveling off[-] until the end of the period in question.

To sum up, the popularity of CDs remained relatively stable[-] over the period, while the other two items witnessed growth[/] . It is also evident that CDs were still the most popular item in the year 2003.

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Subject：

  • The sales of CDs
  • Sales of CDs
  • CDs(直接对象)
  • The popularity of CDs
  • CD sales

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  • 全年最高句型: The sales of CDs were the highest[^] throughout the period, dwindling[\] slightly from just shy of 35 billion dollars in 2000 to nearly 32 billion in 2002. However, sales had recovered[/] to 33 billion by 2003.
  • 双上升/下降 + 幅度拓展: There was a massive escalation[/] in the DVD or video sales, growing[/] from roughly 18 billion in 2000 to just over 30 billion in 2003, with this rise[/] being particularly noticeable between 2001 and 2002, exemplified by as astounding climb[/] of 7 billion.
  • 双上升/下降 + 1+followed by: The sales of game software experienced an upward[/] trend, ascending[/] steadily from approximately 12 billion in 2000 to around 18 billion dollars in 2002, followed by a period of leveling off[-] until the end of the period in question.
  • 总结段全年最高：It is also evident that CDs were still the most popular item in the year 2003.

meat

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初稿

The diagram illustrates the variations in the consumption of four types of food in a specific European country over a 25-year period from 1979 to 2004.

Beef consumption witnessed a downward trend, declining massively from just shy of 220 grams in 1979 to around 100 in 2024, albeit with a marginal growth over the first eight years.

There was a significant ascent in the consumption of chicken, climbing from almost 150 in 1979 to 250 in 2004. In contrast, lamb consumption experienced an inverse trajectory. It dropped substantially from 150 to just over 50 throughout the duration.
Following a different pattern, the consumption of fish remained constantly low during this 25-year period, starting at approximately 60 and ending at almost 40 grams.

To sum up, the popularity of fish fluctuated slightly over the period, while chicken increased, and the other two categories of meat demonstrated a downward trend in the consumption. It is evident that chicken became the most popular choice in the year 2004.

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the consumption of four types of food s-chicken, beef, lamb, and fish- in a specific European country over a 25-year period from 1979 to 2004.

Beef consumption witnessed a downward trend, declining massively from just shy of 220 grams per person per week in 1979 to around 100 grams in 2024, albeit with a marginal growth over the first eight years.

There was a significant ascent in the consumption of chicken, climbing from almost 150 grams in 1979 to 250 grams in 2004. In contrast, lamb consumption experienced an inverse trajectory. It dropped substantially from 150 grams to just over 50 grams throughout the duration.

Following a different pattern, the consumption of fish remained constantly low during this 25-year period, starting at approximately 60 and ending at almost 40 grams.

To sum up, the popularity of chicken increased over the period, while the other three foods showed declines. It is evident that chicken became the most popular choice in the year 2004.

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the consumption of four types of foods-chicken, beef, lamb, and fish-in a specific European country over a 25-year period from 1979 to 2004.

In 1979, beef was by far the most[^] popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week.对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语 The figures for lamb and chicken were similar[=], each hovering around 150 grams, while the consumption of fish was only 60 grams.the figure for 对象 起点段

However, during this 25-year period, the consumption of beef and lamb experienced a massive fall[\], dipping[\] to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams, respectively.1-双上升/下降 2-两个对象并列写法 The consumption of fish also declined[\], although this drop[\] was much less pronounced, dwindling[\] to/ending at just blow 50 grams. 幅度的对比
下降段

In contrast, the consumption of chicken showed an upward[/] trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004, it had surged[/], peaking[^] at almost 250 grams per person per week. 超过段：2句话 上升段

To sum up, the popularity of chicken increased[/] over the period, while the other three foods showed declines[\]. It is evident that chicken became the most[^] popular choice in the year 2004.

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Subject：

  • the consumption of beef
  • the amount of consumed
  • beef consumption
  • the popularity of beef
  • beef

telephone_v2

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the total number of minutes of three types of telephone calls in Britain over an eight-year period between 1995 and 2002.

The use of local fixed line calls was the highest[^] throughout the period, escalating[/] gradually from 72 billion minutes in 1995 to 90 billion in 1999. However, it had fallen[\] back to 72 billion by 2002, returning to its initial level/ending at the same level as it started. 全年最高句型

The usage of national and international fixed line calls experienced an upward[/] trend, growing[/] steadily from 38 billion in 1995 to 61 billion at the end of the period in question 双上升/下降, though the rate of growth[/] decelerated[\] over the last two years/albeit with a slower growth rate over the last two years . 幅度拓展

There was an enormous increase[/] in mobile call usage, surging[/] from a mere 2 billion to 46 billion 双上升/下降, with this rise[/] being particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, exemplified by an astounding climb[/] of 30 billion minutes. 幅度拓展

To sum up, the popularity of local-fixed line calls remained relatively stable over the period, while the other two types of telephone calls witnessed growth. It is also evident that local fixed line calls were still the most popular call type in the year 2002.

10.29 Internet + fish&chips

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Internet

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The diagram depicts the variations in the proportion of people using the Internet in three different nations-the USA, Canada, and Mexico-over a 10-year period from 1999 to 2009.

In 1999, the percentage of individuals who used the Internet in the USA was by far the highest, at approximately 20%.The number / percentage / sales / consumption of sth主语 The figure for Canada stood at 10%, while Internet usage in Mexico was only 5%.the figure for 对象

During this 10-year period, the figures for the USA and Mexico showed steady growth双上升/下降, escalating to just over 80% and nearly 40%, respectively两个对象并列写法. Meanwhile, the proportion of Internet users in Canada also went up, but this increase was much more pronounced 幅度的对比, surpassing that of the USA in 2002 and peaking at around 95% in 2009.超过段：2句话

To sum up, the popularity of the Internet in three different countries experienced an upward trend over the period. It is also evident that Canada had the highest proportion of Internet users at the end of period in the question.

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Subject:

  • the percentage of individuals who used the Internet in the USA
  • the percentage of individuals using the Internet in the USA
  • The use of the Internet in the USA
  • The usage of the Internet in the USA
  • Internet use in the USA
  • Internet usage in the USA

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fish&chips

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the amount of three types of fast foods consumed by teenagers in Australia over a 25-year period from 1975 to 2000.

In 1975, fish and chips were by far the most popular of these fast foods, being consumed around 100 times per year. The figures for hamburgers and pizza were similar, each hovering almost 10 times.

However, during the 25-year period, the consumption of pizza experienced a massive ascent, climbing to just over 80 times. Hamburgers also escalated, but this increase was much more pronounced, ending at approximately 100 times.

In contrast, the number of fish and chips which were consumed displayed a downward trend, being overtaken by hamburgers in 1987 and by pizza in 1991.

To sum up, the popularity of hamburgers and pizza demonstrated noticeable growth over the period, while the other one show a decline. It is also evident that hamburgers became the most popular choice at the end of period in the question.

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The diagram depicts the variations in the consumption of three types of fast foods consumed by adolescents in Australia over a 25-year period between 1975 and 2000.

In 1975, fish and chips was by far the most[^] popular of these fast foods, consumed 100 times per year 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语. The figures for hamburgers and pizza were significantly lower, at 10 and 5 times, respectively the figure for 对象 两个对象并列写法.

However, during this 25-year period, the consumption of fish and chips dwindled[\] to approximately 40 times, reflecting a substantial reduction[\] 双上升/下降 , though there was a slight ascent[/] between 1980 and 1985 三条线整体区间下降，只有中间有一个小上升.

In contrast, the consumption of hamburgers and pizza both experienced a climb[/], overtaking that of fish and chips in 1985 and 1988 超过段：2句话, respectively 两个对象并列写法. By 1995, their consumption had surged[/], rising[/] to 100 times and 85 times双上升/下降, respectively两个对象并列写法 , followed by a period of leveling off[-] until the end of the period 1+followed by. 一起写

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In contrast, the consumption of hamburgers showed an upward trend[/], overtaking that of fish and chips in 1988. By 2000, it had surged[/], peaking[^] at 100 times per year 超过段：2句话. The consumption of pizza also rose[/], although this ascent was less pronounced, growing[/] to 82 times in 1995 幅度对比 before leveling off[-] until the end of the period 1+before. 分开描述

To sum up, the popularity of fish and chips dropped over the period, while the consumption of the other two fast foods increased. It is also evident that hamburgers became the most popular fast food in the year 2000.

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highlight:

  • teenagers=adolescent
  • the amount of m没有列出来的话，可以加可以不加s
  • fish and chips在图片是同一类，所以后面用was
  • 要捕捉上升后平，以及下降过程中的凸起部分

10.31 transportation_v2 + film

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transporation_v2

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The diagram illustrates the variations in the proportion of commuters who used various types of transportation in a specific European city in three separate years: 1960, 1980, and 2000.

起点段In 1960, buses were by far the most[^] popular of these means of transport, with around 38% of commuters using them 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语. The figures for the tube and trains were lower, at 27% and 18%, respectively the figure for 对象 两个对象并列写法, while the least favored choice was cars, with only 7% of people driving to work 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语.

The proportion of commuters using buses dwindled[\] massively to 15% in 2000. Conversely 表相反, there was an enormous escalation[/] in the use of cars to around 38% in 2000.

Train use grew[/] moderately to just over 25% in 1980 before dipping[\] marginally to 23% in 2000 1+before. In contrast, tube usage experienced an inverse trajectory 表相反. It declined[\] to 22% in 1980, followed by a negligible uptick[/] to 25% in 2000 1+followed by.

To sum up, the popularity of trains and cars ascended over the period, while the other two types of transportation witnessed drops. It is also evident that cars became the most popular method of transportation in the year 2000.

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交叉写法

The diagram illustrates the variations in the proportion of commuters who used various types of transportation in a specific European city in three separate years: 1960, 1980, and 2000.

In 1960, buses were by far the most[^] popular of these means of transport, with around 38% of commuters using them 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语 , while the least favored choice was cars, with only 7% of people driving to work 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语 . However, during this 40-year period, the proportion of commuters using buses saw a massive reduction[\], dwindling[\] to 15% in 2000 双上升/下降, whereas there was an enormous escalation[/] in the use of cars, surging[/] to around 38% in 2000 双上升/下降.

Train use grew[/] moderately from 18% in 1960 to just over 25% in 1980 before dipping[\] marginally to 23% in 2000 1+before. In contrast, tube usage experienced an inverse trajectory 表相反. It declined[\] from roughly 27% in 1960 to 22% in 1980, followed by a negligible uptick[/] to 25% in 2000 1+followed by.

To sum up, the popularity of trains and cars ascended over the period, while the other two types of transportation witnessed drops. It is also evident that cars became the most popular method of transportation in the year 2000.

film

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Popular类文章常用的动词：

  • Choose-select-opt for sth
  • Choose-select-opt to do sth
  • Favor=prefer

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Action movies were by far the most favored of these films genres among men 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语, with 40% of male viewers choosing to watch them 数据作主语. In comparison, 20% of men favored comedy movies 数据作主语, while the percentage of men preferring thriller movies was slightly lower The number/percentage/sales/consumption of sth主语, at 15%. In addition, science fiction and western movies had the same figure 对象+had, both at 10%. On the other hand, the least preferred choice was romantic comedies, which attracted only 5% of men 对象+attracted(受欢迎类文章+数据是人).

11.02 timber

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The diagram depicts the variations in the production of three types of products-timber, pulp, and paper-in a specific European country over a 20-year period from 1980 to 2000.

In 1980, timber had the highest production, at 6 million tonnes of timber were produced 【这里要用对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语,因为是加分句型】,which had the highest figure in these products. The production of pulp, at approximately 4 million, was slightly higher than that of paper, at roughly 3 million.

During this 20-year period, the figure for timber showed an upward trend in production, rising to just shy of 8 million, though there was a moderate drop between 1989 and 1995. Paper production experienced a massive climb, surpassing that of timber in 1992. By 2000, it had surged, peaking at 10 million, albeit with a slower growth rate over the last five years. Meanwhile, the production of pulp also went up【直接主语要用in the xxx，不用直接做主语的话，那么就要加上the production of…】, although this increase was much less pronounced, ending at 6 million tonnes.

To sum up, the production popularity 【这个作文中写的是产量，所以不能用受欢迎程度】 of three products displayed an ascent over the period. It is also evident that paper had the largest production【这个地方和上面犯的错误一样，并且largest不一定等于highest，但这里是等价的】 became the most popular product in the forest industry at the end of period in question.

11.07 honeymoon

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The diagram illustrates the number of newlywed British couples who chose the top eight honeymoon destinations in the year 2010.

Thailand was by far the most popular of these honeymoon destinations in this year, with 1410 newlywed British couples choosing it 4.1 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语, while Bali was the second most preferred choice, appealing to 1335 couples 4.1 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语. In comparison, Costa Rica and the Maldives had the similar figures, both at 750 and 600, respectively 4.5 对象+had. Additionally, 432 couples favored the Greek Islands 4.3 数据作主语, whereas 209 selected Paris as their favorite destination 4.3 数据作主语. On the other hand, the least favored choices were the Lake District and Spain, which attracted only 124 and 140 newlywed British couples, respectively 4.6 对象+attracted(受欢迎类文章+数据是人) | 同时这里把对象放在了系动词后面.

To sum up, over half of all couples chose Thailand and Bali as their preferred honeymoon destinations, while only a small number couples opted to visit the Lake District and Spain.

11.16 sector + school(map) + coffee(流程图)

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sector

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highlight:
(1)对象 employed
(2)数据主语+人:
(2-1)Secured employment in
(2-2)Pursued careers in
(2-3)With 数据主语+人+上面的短语
(3)新讲了followed by+double

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The diagram depicts the percentage of graduates from Brighton University who entered various employment sectors in the year 2019.

Service industries were by far the most popular of these employment sectors, with 33.0% of graduates choosing to enter this field 4.1 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语, while the manufacturing industry was the second most favored sector, attracting 16.3% of graduates-a figure half that of service industries 4.1 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语 4.8 double . Education was the next preferred option, which was chosen by 14.7% of graduates 4.1 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语 , followed closely by politics & government, with 12.1% of graduates securing employment in this field 4.9 followed by .

However, the remaining 23.9% was allocated to the other sectors. In detail, the percentages of graduates who entered transportation & warehousing and science & technology were similar, each hovering around 7.5% 4.2 The number/percentage/sales/consumption of sth主语 . Civil service employed 5.6% of graduates 4.6 对象+attracted/appealed to/drew (受欢迎类文章+数据是人), double the percentage of graduates pursuing careers in the other sectors, at 2.8% 4.8 double. The least preferred choices were charity and sports, which attracted only 0.3% and 0.1% of graduates entering these fields, respectively 4.1 对象 was/were by far the most popular(=favored=preferred) of these 复数, with 数据 + 非谓语.

To sum up, almost half of all graduates chose service and manufacturing industries, while only a small number 【of graduates 】opted for charity and sports 4.11 人开头写结尾：popular类文章. 人开头

school(map)

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这两幅地图显示了一所英国学校从1985年到现在的格局变化。

(全部用过去时)1985年，该校有1500名学生，其唯一的办公楼坐落于西北角处。其东边是一片停车场。图书馆和教学楼中间还有一个停车场，人们也可以停车在那儿。校园的南面几乎被运动场所覆盖。

现在，当学生人数上升到2300名，北面的就停车场就被改造成一个全新的半圆形，图书馆变成了电脑室。原本东面的小型停车场如今种满了树木和草坪。原有的教学楼添加了一个楼层，另新建了两个教学楼在其南面和西南面。原操场的西面地区被用来建造游泳馆和健身中心了，因此操场的面积缩小了很多。

总之，之所学校为了更好地适应学生数量增长的需求，将其内部格局进行了巨大的整改。

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The two maps demonstrate the various developmental changes in the campus layout of a UK School in 1985 and present day..

In 1985, the school had 1500 students, and its only office building was located in the northwest corner. To its east, there was a car park. People can also stop their cars in another parking lot between the library and the classroom building. The southern area of the campus was nearly fully covered by a playing field. 过去时

At present, the number of students has exhibited an upward trend, rising to 2300. The old car park in the north area has been reconstructed to a new one with semicircle shapes and the library has been changed into a computer room. To its east, where there was a small car park has been replaced by trees. One storey has been added to the original classroom building, and two new classroom blocks have been constructed to its south and southwest direction. The west area of the playing field has been used for building swimming pool and fitness club, so the playground has shrank significantly. 现在完成时

In sum, this school changed its internal layout dramatically to better suit the need of growth in student number.

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位于：

  • was/were located in
  • was/were situated in

变了：

  • has/have been reconstructed to …
  • has/have been added to….
  • has/have been replaced by…
  • has/have been changed into…
  • has/have been converted into..
  • has/have been used for….
  • has/have been moved toward the….

替代：

  • A is placed in what used to be B
  • A is located in the area of the previous B
  • A occupies part of B

coffee

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Firstly, Coffee beans are picked in the field.
Then, These beans are dried, roasted and cooled.
After that, these beans are put in a machine for grinding.
The coffee is mixed with hot water.
The mixture is strained and frozen.
The frozen liquid is ground again in the machine.
The coffee is dried in a vacuum so that the water evaporates.
Finally, the coffee is packed into jars;

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The flow chart illustrates the whole process of coffee manufacture and preparation for sale on the market.

It is clear that there are 11 stages in the production of coffee. The process begins with the picking of coffee beans, and ends at the packing stage. 凑字数

Looking at the coffee production process in detail, coffee beans must first be picked in the fields. These beans are then dried, roasted, and cooled before being put in a grinding machine, which turns the beans into coffee granules.

At the sixth stage in the process, the ground coffee is mixed with hot water, and the resulting mixture is strained. Next, the mixture is frozen and then passed once again through the grinder. After that, the ground, frozen liquid is dried in a vacuum so that the water evaporates, leaving the coffee granules. Finally, these granules are packed into coffee jars for delivery to shops.

11.18

11.24

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In London, flats were by far the most popular of these housing types, with approximately 58% of people choosing them, while terraced houses and semi-detached houses had the same figure, both at roughly 16%, respectively. The least favored option was detached houses, while attracted just shy of 10% of residents.

In Oxford, flats also had the highest popularity, with around 30% of people selecting this housing type, followed by semi-detached houses and detached houses, which were favored by 28% and 26% of dwellers, respectively. Terraced houses were selected by 18% of residents.

In Cambridge, detached houses were the most favored type, attracting nearly 36% of individuals, double the percentage of residents favoring terraced houses, at 18%. Meanwhile, 28% of people preferred to semi-detached houses, while 20% opted for 20%.

To sum up, residents in London and Oxford showed a preference for flats, while those in Cambridge chose to live in detached houses